Revising a Descriptive Essay. This is the phase where students review, modify, and reorganize their work with the goal of making it the best it can be. In revising a descriptive essay, students should reread their work with these considerations in mind: Does the essay unfold in a way that helps the reader fully appreciate the subject?
I really like this because it was very descriptive and easy to read. I also really like nature and Wordsworth’s descriptions made me relate to some of things he was talking about. “Nutting” is a perfect example of how Romanticists expressed their appreciation of the beauties of nature.